Saturday, November 1, 2008

my first poem in my mother tongue :-)



Jokhn trishna r ghade jal diye
ami udi aakash e
chaand er tala e bishti pode
boshe podi chhaya te...



jokhn amar daak pode
ami naabi niche
thakur ghare..pa dhue
shonde jele, takiye dekhi piche
dadiye ache amar samne
ek bondhu dur er..
kichu bole na she
shudu takaye, nirav e



ebar dadiye ami jigesh kori
kintu bujhte pari na kichu i,
jigasha kori ebar nije ke,
dekhi neer jhore choker paata theke...



ude jaayi pherot nijer disha e
lukiye jai nijer gacher talaye
aar chaand er dike takiye
kaandi praan bhore...
nijer gacher talaye...


4 comments:

  1. amaaazing!! Its the first bong poems that I have come across on blogspace!!way to go!

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  2. um...I wrote that because I am a bong...and which is why I appreciated it!!

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  3. wow! u made me a tinge sad and LOT happy :) ... I wish I could write Bong :( ... Glad to meet u and thanks for the blog hop over :) Huggs S

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  4. ooooooo...thank u soooooo much :)
    it's an old poem... :)
    nice to meet u too.. *hugs*

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